I believe what you posted was very reasonable.
But, what about this? suppose you added a little content? I mean, I don't want to tell you how to run your blog, however what if you added a post title that makes people want more? I mean D' Erlbacher is a little vanilla. You should glance at Yahoo's home page and see how they write article headlines to get people to click.
You might add a related video or a pic or two to grab people interested about everything've got to say. In my opinion, it would bring your website a little bit more interesting.
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